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Now things get nasty.

New chapter up. My muse is still being a bitch about polished phrasing, but the content should give readers something to chew on.

New chapter: Costly Secrets


"You see, they envy the living. And in time, that envy turns to anger, even hate. Should these souls remain in Spira, they become fiends that prey on the living." ~ Lulu
Sometimes, it's not just fiends one has to worry about.

I had originally pitched a slightly tamer version of this idea to fyre_bird, but she convinced me not to beat around the bush.

[[EDIT 2/24 11PM:

Bah, this is getting to be a very bad habit! I just played the game for an hour, got their voices a little more anchored in my head, and thoroughly rewrote the chapter to make the words flow better. No change in content, just cosmetics. ]]



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Mar. 24th, 2006 01:45 pm (UTC)
You asked me to check-- I was able to get to this chapter and to the earlier one (labeled "smut!" just like Tom Lehrer's songs) without having to register or click anything. So, now you know!
Mar. 24th, 2006 05:02 pm (UTC)
Uh oh. Well THAT's no good, now is it? Guess I'd better stop direct-linking and send in a bug report. Thanks my dear!
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