Helluin (auronlu) wrote,
Helluin
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Whoops (Meta: Love Her and Despair)

Minor plot point for those who have already read chapter 20, sufficiently obscure that it shouldn't be a spoiler for those who haven't.

Old: Wakka says CID found a sphere in Zanarkand.
Change to: Wakka says WE (meaning, he and Rikku) found a sphere in Zanarkand.

I thought it might have derailed the backstory plot if Wakka had seen it prior to the end of Yuna's pilgrimage, but actually, now that I've tweaked it, it works perfectly.
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