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resurrection iiI: New chapter!

Whew, yet another chapter that felt like pulling teeth to get it finished. Plot and scenes between more than 3 people are very hard for me. I think this works, though!

Chapter 15: Desperate Measures.

 

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lassarina
May. 29th, 2006 07:13 pm (UTC)
Very nice; I like the sense you bring to it that the pilgrimage *is* a difficult thing. It's so easy to forget, when one is simply waving a joystick about, that doing that sort of thing is bloody *hard*!
auronlu
May. 29th, 2006 07:26 pm (UTC)
I know, and the fact that characters can just keep going even after getting SHOT or crushed by huge monsters makes it seem like not a big deal. These folks are inhumanly tough and have magic whatsits to heal themselves in mid-battle, but even so, I imagine the magic can't completely make up for the battering they put themselves through.
rustehroll
May. 29th, 2006 08:35 pm (UTC)
I really liked this. I'll be able to give better feedback later but this was great.

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Yeah. I think you managed the more than two-three people at a time thing just great. This was one of the better pilgrimage scenes I've read.
saharasnow
May. 30th, 2006 01:23 am (UTC)
I think that was handled pretty well =D
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